Thr graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2010

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The graphics illustrate the data about how many
commuters
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travel every day by three transport modes in the UK, over a forty-year period between 1970 and 2010.
Overall
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, it is evident that the
number
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of
commuters
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by car experienced an upward trend,
while
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commuters
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who travel by
bus
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and by train declined. At the beginning of the period, all three figures remained unchanged between 1970 and 1980.
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travelers
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by car and train increased steadily, the
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of people who reached their work by
bus
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markedly declined to around 3.5 million in 2000.
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this
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, travelling by
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become
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less popular, which resulted in a decline in the
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of
commuters
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to 3 million. At
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point, the
number
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of people who travel by train has grown markedly, but the result was the same as that of travellers by
bus
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.
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,
commuters
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by car plateaued in 2010, which marked the highest point of the period.

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