IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 5.5

The bar chart below shows the sales of books in three different formats in a specific country over a two-year period, 2022 and 2023. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

✍️ Want to check your own essay?Write on this topic →
The bar chart below shows the sales of books in three different formats in a specific country over a two-year period, 2022 and 2023. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates
compares
Verb problem
apply
show examples
the
sales
Use synonyms
 of
print
Use synonyms
books
Use synonyms
 . E-
books
Use synonyms
 and Audiobooks in
defferent
Correct your spelling
different
 formats from 2022 to 2023.
Overall
Linking Words
,
Print
Use synonyms
books
Use synonyms
 recorded the highest number of
sales
Use synonyms
 in both years ,
while
Linking Words
,
Punctuation problem
apply
show examples
 Audiobooks had the lowest. In 2022,
Print
Use synonyms
books
Use synonyms
 recorded the highest Figure of
sales
Use synonyms
around
Punctuation problem
, around
show examples
 85
Use synonyms
millions of
Check wording
million
show examples
units
Use synonyms
. The e-book and audiobooks consumed approximately 44
Use synonyms
millions of
Replace the word
million
units
Use synonyms
 and 15
Use synonyms
millions of
Replace the word
million
units
Use synonyms
. respectively. In 2023 .
the
Capitalize the word
The
show examples
 number of
sales
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Print
Change preposition
of print
show examples
books
Use synonyms
 reached
at
Change preposition
apply
show examples
70
Use synonyms
millions of
Check wording
million
show examples
units
Use synonyms
. The e-
books
Use synonyms
 consumed approximately 55
Use synonyms
millions of
Check wording
million
show examples
units
Use synonyms
.
audiobook
Correct article usage
The audiobook
show examples
 had the lowest Figure.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, print, books, millions, units with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: