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The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

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The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The line chart provides key information about Australian
exports
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 to four
countries
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. The units are measured in percentages.
Overall
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, it is clear from the line chart that
exports
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 to
two
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countries
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 are the highest;
in addition
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, China and Japan are dominant among the
countries
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,
whereas
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 the other
two
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countries
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 are stable before the start of
exports
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 between Australia and the four
countries
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.
According to
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 what is shown,
exports
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 to China have been increasing from 1990 until 2012, from 2% to 28%, with remarkable development and a strong relationship between these
countries
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.
Moreover
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, Japan has seen a slight decrease in
exports
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 to it, from 26% in 1990 to 17% in 2012 In terms of the other
two
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countries
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,
first,
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India has seen a slight rise from 1990 to 2012. But not a lot.
In addition
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, the US has been stable throughout all years of
exports
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 between the
two
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countries
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.
This
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 is all.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, countries, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Percentage
  • Exports
  • Trend analysis
  • Upward/downward trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Comparison
  • Peak performance
  • Decline
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Inferred
  • Global events
  • Economic context
  • Reflect
  • Influence
  • Patterns
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