The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing, and entertainment.

The table shows the proportion of monthly household salary in five European regions,

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salaries are spent on food and drink, housing, dressing, and entertainment.

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Turkey

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has the highest

expenses

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on food and drinks,

France

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and France

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is

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has the

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lowest

one

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expenses

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on clothing.

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, clothing and entertainment spending are the same in

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UK

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the UK

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. First of all, French

people

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account for 25% for food and drinks,

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Germany is lower by 3%. Unlike

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kingdom is higher

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both previous countries with 27%,

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apply

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Turkish

people

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are the highest in

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with 36%,

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the second highest country is

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with 31%.

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, housing

expenses

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in Spain

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lowest with 18%,

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the

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the biggest is

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UK

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the UK

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with 37%, but the second biggest is Germany with 33%. After these three countries is France with 31%,

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Turkey

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is

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has a

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lower

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percentage than

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this

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country with 20%.

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, the clothing

expenses

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in France

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lowest with 7%,

after

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this

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country

Spain

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, Spain

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is higher by 1%. Unlike those two

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Germany is the highest with 15%,

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the second highest is

Turkey

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with 12%, compared with

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UK

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the UK

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is

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lower by 1%.

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entertainment's

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entertainment

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expenses

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German

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people

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are the biggest with 19%

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after them Spanish

people

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with 15%.

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French

people

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are lower by 2%.

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,

Uk

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account for 11% whilst

Turkey

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is lower by 1%.