The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
THE DATA ILLUSTRATES THE LOCATION AND FORMS OF DANCE CLASSES AMONG YOUNGSTERS IN A CITY IN AUSTRALIA ARE RECENTLY PARTICIPATING.
OVERALL
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, IT CAN BE SAID THAT THE PRIVATE STUDIOS ARE HIGHLY IN DEMAND AND THE COLLEGE-BASED STUDIOS HAVE THE LEAST AMONG CHILDREN.
SIMILARLY
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, children under 11 HAVE MORE
INTEREST
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IN
BALLET
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DANCE,
ALTHOUGH
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11-16 age group has considerably more
interest
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in modern formINTEREST IN MODERN FORM. AFTER ANALYISING THE CHART, IT IS ABUNDANTLY CLEAR THAT
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THE PRIVATE THEATRES ARE USED BY 48%
STUDENTS
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, WHICH HOLDS THE HIGHEST PORTION.
WHEREAS
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, SCHOOL HALLS WASAGE WAS 24%.
MOREOVER
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, THE COMMUNITY HALLS AND OTHER HAVE 18% DEMAND.
LIKEWISE
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, COLLEGE BASE PLATFORM HAVE 10% NEED, SHOWING LEAST
INTEREST
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RATE.
ON THE OTHER HAND
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, YOUNG PEOPLE UNDER 11 SHOW
INTEREST
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IN
BALLET
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WITH 600
STUDENTS
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AND LOWEST IN MODERN FORM
THAT IS
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300, WHICH IS HALF OF THE NUMBER OF
BALLET
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.
HOWEVER
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, IN TAP YOUNG GENERATION HAVE 400 AND 459
STUDENTS
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INTEREST
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BY BOTH AGE CATEGORIES, UNDER 11 AND BETWEEN 11-16, RESPECTIVELY.
IN ADDITION
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, children aged 11-16 AGE HAVE MORE
INTEREST
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IN LEARNING MODERN FORM OF DANCE WITH 520 NUMBERS AND LOWEST IN
BALLET
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WITH 300
STUDENTS
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, RESPECTIVELY.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attending
  • currently
  • location
  • variety
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • jazz
  • venues
  • popularity
  • attendees
  • juxtaposing
  • correlating
  • proximity
  • cultural influences
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • monopoly
  • proportion
  • distribution
  • enrollment
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