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The bar chart shows the distribution of employment among agriculture, services, industries in three countries in 1980 and in 2020

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The bar chart shows the distribution of employment among agriculture, services, industries in three countries in 1980 and in 2020
THE GIVEN DATA ILLUSTRATES THE DISTRIBUTION OF JOB AMONG FARMING,
SERVICES
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 AND INDUSTRIES IN THREE NATIONS FROM 1980 TO 2020.
OVERALL
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IT IS CLEAR THAT
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COUNTRY
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 A HAD THE HIGHEST FIGURES FOR
SERVICES
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,
WHILE
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 THE LOWEST FOR
AGRICULTURE
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.
ALSO
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, IN
COUNTRY
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 B,
AGRICULTURE
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 HAD THE HIGHEST NUMBERS,
WHEREAS
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 THE LOWEST WAS SEEN IN THE INDUSTRY. THE MAIN CHANGES WERE SEEN IN
COUNTRY
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 C,
SERVICES
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 RECORDED FOR THE HIGHEST PERCENTAGE,
ALTHOUGH
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 LEAST RECORDED IN
AGRICULTURE
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. LOOKING FIRST AT
COUNTRY
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 A, IN 1980 EMPLOYMENT ACOUUNTED THE LARGEST IN
SERVICES
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 WITH 45% AND 55% IN 2000, RESPECTIVELY.
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, FOR AGRICUALTURE AND INDUSTRY IT HOLDS 30% AND 19% IN 1990,
WHEREAS
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 29% AND 15% IN 2020.
HOWEVER
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, IN
COUNTRY
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 B,
AGRICULTURE
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 ACCOUNTED FOR THE HIGHEST PROPORTION WITH 55% AND 48% IN 1980 AND 2020.
ALSO
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,
SERVICES
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 HOLD THE SECOND POSITION WITH 23% AND 42% IN BOTH YEARS. APART FROM THAT, 20% AND 40% WERE SEEN IN INDSTURY SECTOR. TURNING TO THE REMAKING CATEGORIES, IN
COUNTRY
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 C,
SERVICES
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 HOLD THE LARGEST PERCENTAGE WITH 65 % AND 80% IN BOTH YEARS.
IN ADDITION
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, INDUSTRY ACCOUNTED FOR 22% AND 18%. BUT, THE
AGRICULTURE
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 SECTOR SHARED ALMOST EXTINCTION RATES
THAT IS
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 2% and 1% IN 1980 AND 2020.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, whereas".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words services, country, agriculture with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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