The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Thailand who visited four different places in Bangkok. Summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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individuals who visited four different places in Thailand: Bangkok Zoo, Sea World, Wax Museum, and

China Town

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Chinatown

during the period from 2014 to 2017. Overview

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, it is evident that China Town recorded the highest figure in 2016,

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it dropped dramatically to the lowest the next year.

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, Sea World represented

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year,

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decreased until

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around 20 in 2017. Meanwhile, the Wax Museum rose gradually in

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three years

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slightly in 2017. Details (Body Paragraphs) Turning to Bangkok Zoo, it started at 50 in 2014.

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decreased significantly to 20 by 2015.

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rose slightly to approximately 22 in 2016,

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it fell sharply

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7 in 2017.

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, Sea World began at 70 in 2014.

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fluctuated between around 40 in 2015 to 50 in 2016, before

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down to almost 18 in 2017.

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Wax Museum stood at nearly 43 and grew moderately to about 65 in 2015, and continues rising to reach 80 in 2016, before dropping rapidly to 70 in 2017. Looking at China Town,

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at roughly 20 in 2014, and

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to 80 in 2015, before reaching a peak

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100 in 2016, and

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to 10 in 2017.