The maps below show the present layout of Willowby Village and the proposed changes to the area by 2040.

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The two map illustration depicts how Willowby

village

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will change

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between the present time

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and in the year 2040.

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, after 14 years, it is believed that the

village

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will face and undergo significant and

extinsive

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extensive

development changes. Notably, in 2040, the Church and the swan

remanied

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remained

unchanged,

while

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other

location

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locations

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were expanded, relocated or renamed

other

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locations faced modern community facilities.

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, new

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were added. In the meantime. The

village

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consists of 7 sectors, namely, the Church, the

Village

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Hall, the Corner shop, the Swan, the King's Arms, the Red lion and the

sports

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field.

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all 6 locations and other residential houses take place along the middle of the

village

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, the

Sports

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field sits next to the

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King's Arms

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, the area at the back of the Church,

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Village

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the Village

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hall,

Corner

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the Corner

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Shop, the Swan and the Red Lion

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not used , and nothing is built there.

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, in 2040, the

village

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hall is expanded and is renamed to the community hub.

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, the residential area would be removed to the back , and a new street would be built. New locations are added, like

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the community health centre, the EV charging hub, the flood management wetland, the solar farm and the cycle path. The

sports

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field is

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renamed to the

sports

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centre and is more developed.

maryam Alghawi

Oct 15, 2026

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words village, sports with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

222 words

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