ALL CARS THAT BURN FOSSIL FUELS SHOULD BE BANNED AND ELECTRIC CARS SHOULD REPLACE THEM. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

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Introduction

IT IS WIDELY ARGUED THAT THE

FUEL-CARCARS

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FUEL-CAR CARS

SHOULD BE REPLACED BY ELECTRIC

CARS

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. AS,

WHILE

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DOING SO IT IMPROVE THE AIR QUALITY LEADS TO IMPROVE HEALTH

RATE

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IN ADDITION

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, WITH MINIMUM USAGE, IT WILL STRENGTHEN THE ECONOMIC

RATE

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OF THE

GOVERNMENT

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. I TOTALLY AGREE WITH

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STATEMENT, AND

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WILL BE DISCUSSING MORE ABOUT

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IN UPCOMING PARAGRAPHS.

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TO EMBARK UPON, USING A WIDE RANGE OF ELECTRIC

CARS

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WILL HELP IN IMPROVING THE AIR QUALITY INDEX , AND

THIS

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WILL LEAD TO A LOW LEVEL OF DISEASE CONDITIONS. SO, THE

GOVERNMENT

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WILL PAY LESS ATTENTION TOWARDS THE HOSPITAL FACILITIES , AND IT WILL IMPROVE THEIR BUDGET

ALSO

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WHILE

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INVESTING LESS IN THE HEALTHCARE SECTOR.

FOR INSTANCE

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, IN JAPAN, PEOPLE HAVE A HIGHER HEALTH

RATE

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THAN UNHEALTHY, BECAUSE OF BETTER AIR QUALITY AND LOW POLLUTION BY INTRODUCING ELECTRIC VEHICLES.

THEREFORE

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, HAVING THESE KINDS OF PRODUCTS WILL BE HELPFUL IN

FUTURE

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THE FUTURE

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GROWTH

RATE

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AND FOR PREVENTION.

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TO CONTINUE WITH, IT WILL

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PLAY A CRUCIAL ROLE IN BUDGET MANAGEMENT . AS, LOW CONSPUMTUON OF PERTOL AND DIESEL WILL IMPROVE THE ECONOMY

RATE

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OFTHE GOVERNMEN5. AND THE EXPORTATION OF FOSSIL FUELS WILL

ALSO

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BE DECREASED.

THUS

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, IT HELPS IN LOW EXPENSES IN TRADING. TO EPITOMISE, IN INDIA, THE

GOVERNMENT

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FOCUSED MORE ON THE ELECTRIC

CARS

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BY PROMOTING THEIR DESIGN, STRUCTURE AND BY DOING

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IY WILL GAIN MORE PUBLIC INTEREST IN ELECTRIC ONE THAN FOSSIL FUELS.

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WILL BE HELPFUL IN MANAGING THE BUDGET.

THEREFORE

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, IT DIRECTLY IMPACT ON THE GROWTH

RATE

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OF THE

GOVERNMENT

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Conclusion

TO RECAPITULATE, BANNING FOSSIL FUELS HAVE MORE BENEFITS FOR THE SOCIETY AND THE

GOVERNMENT

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IN THE HEALTH SECTOR.

ALSO

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, BY INDUCING ELECTRIC

CARS

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ATTAIN A STRONG GROWTH

RATE

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BY THE

GOVERNMENT

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task response

State your view in a clear and simple way. You agree, but explain why a full ban is needed, not only why electric cars are good.

task response

Develop each main idea with a clear link: fossil-fuel cars cause air pollution; less pollution may mean fewer health problems; this can lower some public health costs.

task response

Be careful with claims about money. A government may save money on oil, but it must also spend money on charging points, power, and help for people who cannot buy electric cars.

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Use examples that are clear and true. The points about Japan and India are too general. Explain one real change or use a short made-up example instead.

coherence and cohesion

Your essay has an introduction, two main parts, and an ending. Keep this plan, but start each body part with one direct main idea.

coherence and cohesion

Do not use many linking words with the same meaning, such as “therefore”, “thus”, and “also”. Use simple links only when they show a clear connection.

coherence and cohesion

Avoid very long sentences with many ideas. Write shorter sentences so that the reader can follow your meaning.

coherence and cohesion

Some words are repeated too often, such as “growth rate”, “health rate”, and “government”. Use simple words like “health”, “the economy”, “public money”, and “the state” where needed.

task response

You give a clear opinion and keep the essay focused on electric cars, air quality, health, and public money.

coherence and cohesion

The essay has a clear overall order: opening, two reasons, and a final summary.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

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Linking words for giving examples:

for example
for instance
to illustrate this
to give a clear example
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to illustrate
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

284 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

fossil fuels
emissions
air pollution
greenhouse gases
climate change
sustainable
renewable
electric vehicles
battery technology
charging infrastructure
range anxiety
government support
incentives
subsidies
renewable energy
environmental impact
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