IELTS Writing Samples Band 6. Page 1618

IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

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Children in many countries are eating more fast food and convenience snacks. Why are children doing this and how serious are the consequences?

Children nowadays are turning to fast food and convenience snacks and there are many reasons for this unhealthy trend. Globalization, the influence of the western culture, fast services, high disposable income and unique taste are some of the factors encouraging the intake of fast food. This article will throw light on some of the major causes of this practice and the possible consequences.

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It is sometimes argued that prison is the best place for criminals, while others think that there are better ways to deal with them. What is your opinion?

Many people hold the belief that prison is the best place for keeping criminals, others, however, subscribe to the view that there are more efficient solutions to handle them. While both arguments are justified to some extent, I lay my thoughts alongside the alternative ways.

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Nowadays, sport is becoming a big business with high earnings for professional sportspeople and a lot of companies have involved in financially and in other ways. Is it a positive or negative development of sport?

Sport is currently being contained commerce by companies and a huge amount of money which is paid for sports people. While this trend can be positive to some extent, I would argue that it is more negative.

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Formal exams are used to assess students at the end of the semester in many countries. Why these exams are used by schools and universities ? What other types of assessment are possible ?

Every public institution of education needs tools for grades its students and one of the ways to do so is be a formal exam at the end of every semester. This type of assessment has many advantages and one of the most important is a commonly accepted and unified system of grading which compares people across the country or even a continent. However, a formal examination is not the only possible way to evaluate a pupil; a semester long diary made by a tutor or preparing a student's presentation perfectly complements the picture.

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Schools are no longer necessary, because children can get so much information available through Internet, and they can study just as well at home. What extent do you agree or disagree?

In this Fast-paced generation, the Impact of technology has been extended to education and lead to an arguable debate. It is often considered by many individuals that Schools are no more needed, infact, pupils can obtain the required knowledge through online websites. I completely disagree with the above statement and this essay will put forward some reasons with supporting reasons.

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Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that people are suffering from loads of health-related issues because of excessive consumption of fast food. Some people hold a thought that education should take responsibility for this phenomenon while some others have little faith in this solution. This essay contends that education is such an applicable solution, and it will discuss both points of view.

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In cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

At present, in most of cities and towns of all countries across the globe, the dispute of traffic congestion is looming large. For this situation, people can not be solely blamed, but many other factors play significant roles too. To mimic this dilemma, many steps should be taken into consideration by governments.

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In the past, sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break world records. These dáy, they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous. What massage does this send to young people and how does this attitude to sport affect the sports themselves?

Several decades ago, the aim’s athletes were to win a competition and to break the new world records. Nowadays, it seems to have changed, since many young sports persons consider it as the opportunity to become a celebrity or to earn more money. This practice causes lots of harmful impacts. This following essay will discuss about how effect to the young generation in general and the athletics in particular.

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Some people feel that education should be provided exclusively by the state and private education should be prohibited. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education is crucial for the overall development of humanity. In most countries, both private and public institutions provide education. Some people believe that the government should be the only provider of education in a country. I completely disagree with this statement. This essay will discuss the importance of having both private and government educational institutes.

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Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some individuals opine that verbal communication is more essential than written communication. One can communicate in either ways which is convenient to them. In my opinion, it varies from individual to individual and sometimes it depends on the context which the matter is to be conveyed to other person. Analyzing both the inabilities, the two ways of communication is essential to transfer the information.

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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

There are a lot of opinions about giving homework to children, and some of . However, in my opinion, home task is unnecessary and useless, and in this essay, I will delve into both views and determine my choice whether homework is useful.

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Sales companies should recruit people who are hungry for money as they will make the most dedicated workers. Do you think money is the driving force behind hard work?

Some companies of today hiring that employees who are hungry for cash by which firms think that these employees will do their task dedicately. But according to me, money is not only the driving force behind hard work which I will discuss in further paragraphs.

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More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

With the advance of technology and the Internet, employees have a chance to work in different places which is suitable such as at home . In my opinion, this change is a positive development in working more productively.

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Some people believe that it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, physical activities are a part of our lives, they are inside of our routine and everybody needs them. School kids are not the exception, but some people prefer to give them more academic activities than sports. In this essay we will cover both points of views.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

In the last decade, obesity in young children has been one of the most alarming concerns around the world. Children mostly in developed countries are more prone to being overweight and less fit which leads to many behavior disorders and might have fatal consequences in the long run. This essay will discuss the causes of being overweight and how it affects the upbringing of young children.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued by some that teenagers have the most pleasure, while others argue that adulthood is the best time when people enjoy the life, despite challenges of that age. This essay supports that people are joyous during teen years. It will discuss both views.

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Some people say it is more important to plant trees in towns and cities than to build housing. Do you agree or disagree?

I completely agree with the statement that it is more meaningful to plant trees in the open urban areas, rather than building more houses. Trees not only provide environmental benefits, but also provide numerous social and economic benefits. This essay intends to discuss my opinion and these benefits.

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An increasing number of people today change their career and place of residence several times during their life. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays grow a tendency changes profession because we have much broader capabilities for changing specialization or country. However, I cannot completely accept this trend because think one country and profession had better than difference; however, people have different situation and goals that this essay consider.

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We cannot help everyone in tbe world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.To what extent do u agree or disagree.

Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as there are problems in our own society. I disagree with this view because I believe that we should try to help as many people as possible.

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The government should task unhealthy food so that more people will be encouraged to eat healthy food Do you agree or disagree?

It is being suggested that to promote healthy eating amongst individuals, the government must enforce a levy on processed foods. I agree with this statement because imposing taxes on fatty foods could lead to a hike in price and also promote the availability of healthy food options at an affordable rate.

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