IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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As a part of globalisation, English has become the most widely spoken language around the world. Although the drawbacks do exist, the benefits are countless. Personally, I believe that the benefits of this trend have more significance than its demerits and this will continue in the coming years.
It is argued by some that dining at own house is beneficial than having outdoor food at hotels. In my opinion, I agree that people can have the benefits of hygienic and cost-effective meals by cooking the food at their homes.
In today's modern world, youths are tempted to explore some illegal drugs at an early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of the society who set a bad example are responsible for this. The main causes for drug abuse is peer pressure and lack of awareness which might result in contacting some deadly diseases like HIV and hepatitis B. This can be resolved by motivating the youth against consuming these illegal drugs.
The children are the tender buds of the society, thus we must teach and nurture them with utmost care. While it is extremely necessary for adolescence to learn the difference between the bad and good behaviour from the earliest age, the physical punishment is not at all advisable.
Recently, there has been an increasing trend of young people, widening their horizons by doing a balancing act of advancing their career or education and pursuing other valued interests such as travelling and volunteering. A valid and crucial point on one side is the need for focus and prioritization of education and work alone. While others are avidly advocating diversifying their experience by going abroad or exploring their hobbies. This essay will discuss why it is advantageous for a person to pursue worthy goals such as studying and working while doing other interests.
A few people claim that job satisfaction is mandatory and people should be pleasured with a lack of money. While others think that people have to change their own circumstances. From my point of view, the quality of life depends on income or job satisfaction which is a key factor of happiness and health.
Productivity place a significant role in every organisation. Some people ponder that to motivate employees employers should pay them on the basis of their output and sales. I partially agree with this statement because I think that, undoubtedly this method is beneficial for encouraging employees, but there are some other methods are also available to inspire worker.
Pets have become human beings' friends for a long time and have been playing an important role in their owners' daily lives. Whether owning a pet is the right decision or not, I personally believe, depends on individual's personal conditions. The essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a pet.
When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.
It has been observed that married couples in some countries prefer to have children at an older age these days as compared to the past. The main cause of this trend is delayed marriages to achieve stability in life. In my opinion, having children at later stages is disadvantaged due to an increased propensity to newborn abnormalities born to older mothers and less energetic parents to take care of the youngsters, and these outweigh the basic benefit of stability in the life
Constant migration to the big cities has become a common phenomenon all over the world. To prevent this, national authorities are instigating industries and businesses to move to the suburbs. Personally, I am in favour of that although, this trend has minor drawbacks, the positive outcomes certainly overweigh them.
Most of the nation today, parents are capable of deciding which schools they want to send their children to, single-sex academy or co-educational academy. As s result, some think that going to single-sex academy may cause children some drawbacks when they grow older. I partly agree with this perspective and the essay will discuss on both sides.
Speaking in a foreign language in a region where you live can cause serious social and practical problems. This essay will discuss why do foreign dialect cannot be useful and why it can raise significant problems.
Some argue that performing arts are as essential as other subjects and even more to primary school children. This essay agrees with that statement and will first discuss how taking part in music, art or drama is a means for a child to express themselves and then talk about how it could help students explore unconventional career paths, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
Many people argue that knowledge in the science field, business information as well as academic one should be publicized, meanwhile, others suppose that it would be better to limit the access to the information. I believe that some vital concepts should not be easily accessible to the whole community.
The responsibility of improving the environment is controversial. Some people claim it is the responsibility of every individual, however, others feel only governments and large companies can bring a change. In my perspective, the governments and the large companies can set rules and regulations, ultimately it is the people who need to protect the environment.
With the modernization of infrastructure, the regional business is failing to compete with the ones which provide ultra modern shopping experience. In my opinion, it has quite detrimental effects on the growth and development of economy. This essay sheds some light on the negative impacts of this situation.
Technology has brought about a considerable shift in the way communication between individuals and companies take place; a shift from the traditional face to face interaction towards online communication. However, the central question is whether the change is positive, or whether there are more drawbacks than advantages?
Technology-based means of communication are preferred to face-to-face interaction by an increasing number of both businesses and individual people in work and social contexts. Although technological advances have made communication quicker, cheaper and possible over any distance, their use is also associated with a number of drawbacks.
People have different views about crimes and their punishment. In some places, the number of young age crime is escalating. Few people say that teenage criminals should be given adult punishment,not concentrating on age. While I agree that youth should not be given adult punishment. I believe that they must be given an adult sort of punishment according to the crimes.
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