While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

Good employees are very important for any companies. They represent the company and share
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opinion about company outlook to the outside world. It is very important to recruit
people
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oint of view for frictionless and smooth running for any company. The employee
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to found some balance between personal
qualities
, qualification, and
experience
. Recruiter
need
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to found some balance between personal
qualities
, qualification, and
experience
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agree
both of these components are important. At the outset, there are numerous reasons
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why
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components are
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important but the most conspicuous one
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lies
in the fact that
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nobody
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her
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erson which is grumpy, rude, play unfair despite, that employee
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a hight
education
,
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and big
job
experience
. When
people
have that kind of person in
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team,
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tmosphere in
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ob is taff.
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study says
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reason why
people
now often change
job
.
Comunnication
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Communication
skills
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also
important when employee have
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contact with customers. Nobody
want
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make shopping in shops, or enjoy
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the dinner in
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estaurant, where
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ave a
job
people
with lacking social
skills
.
On the other hand
, there are many occupations that do require social
skills
,
experience
and
education
.
For example
, for
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ilot, it is necessary to have
experience
,
education
and
also
have personal
qualities
. Personal
qualities
are important when they have
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contact with passengers and other team members, but in case of some emergency situation, personal
qualities
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enought
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enough
. That time, most important is
education
about how the
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aeroplane
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the emergency procedure and extensive pilot
experience
. In summary, both components are important on different
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types of jobs. For specialists' jobs
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experience
and
education
play a
first
plan role,
however
, for occupations related to personal contact, social
skills
is a crucial element.
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