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With a fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages.

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In
 the present day world, an increasing number of people opt
fast
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food
 over homely meals. Fast
food
 outlets like KFC, Pizza Hut etc
has
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 become commonplace in almost every nook and corner of the world.
Thus
, people find it convenient to replace home-cooked traditional
dishes
 with junk
food
.In my opinion,
this
 development has more negative effects than positive. There are countless hazards that are brought in by fast
food
.
First,
eating a regular diet of processed
food
 is the main cause
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obesity.
This
 increase in body mass
make
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 our body prone to lifestyle disorders like increased blood glucose, pressure and cholesterol levels.It will in turn deteriorate our health and may even lead us to depression.
Thus
 it is evident that dining out regularly would negatively affect
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our
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 physical and mental
helath
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health
.
Furthermore
, as people turn away from traditional
dishes
, they
would
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 soon
loose
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its
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their
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 significance.
This
 will lead to
decrease
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a decrease
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of
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in
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diversity
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the diversity
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 of various
indegenous
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indigenous
dishes
.
Moreover
, eating out on a regular basis creates
financial
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 burden as well.
However
, we cannot forget the ease of getting delicious
cusines
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cuisine
cuisines
 from eateries. It would be a joyous
experince
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experience
 for a person to dine out with near ones once in a
while
. In
adition
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addition
,
this
 would
also
 help us to taste
cusines
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cuisine
cuisines
 from different
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 of the world. In conclusion, fast
food
 if consumed on a regular basis would lead to serious health concerns. Even though junk
food
 is delicious and easily available it would replace traditional
dishes
 and would cause
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addiction
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 as well.
Thus
, the hazardous
effecs
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effects
effect
 are prevalent over positive aspects.
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