With a fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages.
n
the present day world, an increasing number of people opt Correct your spelling
In
fast
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for fast
food
over homely meals. Fast Use synonyms
food
outlets like KFC, Pizza Hut etc Use synonyms
has
become commonplace in almost every nook and corner of the world. Correct subject-verb agreement
have
Thus
, people find it convenient to replace home-cooked traditional Linking Words
dishes
with junk Use synonyms
food
.In my opinion, Use synonyms
this
development has more negative effects than positive. There are countless hazards that are brought in by fast Linking Words
food
. Use synonyms
First,
eating a regular diet of processed Linking Words
food
is the main cause Use synonyms
for
obesity. Change preposition
of
This
increase in body mass Linking Words
make
our body prone to lifestyle disorders like increased blood glucose, pressure and cholesterol levels.It will in turn deteriorate our health and may even lead us to depression. Change the verb form
makes
Thus
it is evident that dining out regularly would negatively affect Linking Words
out
physical and mental Correct your spelling
our
helath
. Correct your spelling
health
Furthermore
, as people turn away from traditional Linking Words
dishes
, they Use synonyms
would
soon Wrong verb form
will
loose
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lose
its
significance. Correct pronoun usage
their
This
will lead to Linking Words
decrease
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a decrease
the decrease
of
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in
diversity
of various Add an article
the diversity
a diversity
indegenous
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indigenous
dishes
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, eating out on a regular basis creates Linking Words
financial
burden as well. Correct article usage
a financial
However
, we cannot forget the ease of getting delicious Linking Words
cusines
from eateries. It would be a joyous Correct your spelling
cuisine
cuisines
experince
for a person to dine out with near ones once in a Correct your spelling
experience
while
. In Linking Words
adition
, Correct your spelling
addition
this
would Linking Words
also
help us to taste Linking Words
cusines
from different Correct your spelling
cuisine
cuisines
part
of the world. In conclusion, fast Fix the agreement mistake
parts
food
if consumed on a regular basis would lead to serious health concerns. Even though junk Use synonyms
food
is delicious and easily available it would replace traditional Use synonyms
dishes
and would cause Use synonyms
addition
as well. Correct your spelling
addiction
Thus
, the hazardous Linking Words
effecs
are prevalent over positive aspects.Correct your spelling
effects
effect
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