Some people argue that girls and boys should be educated separately, while others think that it is more advantageous for children to study at the same school. What is your opinion?

It is believed that children should go to mixed-
sex
school
while the opponents think that it is better to teach schoolboys and schoolgirls independently. From my
perpective
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
perspective
prospective
, I truly believe that the connection between students in
school
age in all genders bring about vital merits. On the one hand, co-education is beneficial in many ways.
First
,
this
can improve the contact between males and females in in numerous aspects.
In particular
, when students have
team
Suggestion
teamed
-working tasks, boys and girls may learn how to assign duties which suite their
sex
characteristics,
such
as boys tend to undertake physical-required tasks
such
as carrying heavy learning materials.
In addition
, children may become more competitive when boys and girls study together,
thus
they can make the grade in their academic performance.
Furthermore
, going to two-gender schools may
creat
make or cause to be or to become
create
a better harmony atmosphere between pupils because they could balance extreme attitudes of their counterparts as well as they have chances to experience anniversaries together
such
as day of
man
Suggestion
a man
and woman.
In other words
, basing on
this
trait, students are encouraged in forming sound sentiment and virtue.
On the other hand
, going to
single
Suggestion
a single sex school
sex
school
may be less effective.
Firstly
,
this
kind of education could lack of balance of
sex
nature and does not fit social model.
This
may leads
Suggestion
may lead
to long detrimental impacts on
psycology
Suggestion
the psychology
psychology
and
physiology of students
Suggestion
physiology students
.
For instance
, the boys could be unduly naughty and kick up a dust in the class while the girls may tend to be too bitchy when a group of them are studying jointly.
Secondly
,
chilren
a young person of either sex
children
could accept gender pattern which
are shaped
Suggestion
is shaped
in single
sex
school
.
Consequently
, they seem do not know how to react with males in the future situations, and
this
may causes
Suggestion
may cause
hardships and challenges which they ought to face in their relations. In
conclution
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
, I fully support the view that children should go to mixed-
sex
school
instead
of teaching boys and girls separately.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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