The graphs show percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the proportion of usage of different features of the mobile phone
in to
seven categories for three specific Join the words
into
years
; 2006, 2008 and 2010.
About all the
people Correct article usage
apply
used
the phone for making calls. The Correct pronoun usage
who used
second
highest ratio was of sending and receiving messages that was
in around Change the verb form
were
70s
and rose by Change the article
the 70s
few
percentages over the Correct article usage
a few
years
. around 70% of the population used it to capture pictures and the percentages increased in the subsequent years
by just a few percent
. the phone was Change the spelling
per cent
also
used to browse the internet; data for 2006 was not found, but it was 41% in the year 2008 which also
doubled to 73% in 2010. 12% of the individuals used it to play music in 2006 and this
ratio remained same
in the following Correct article usage
the same
years
.Submitted by psychologist93 on
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