When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people have demands for a
salary
. On the basis of the education and experience individual expect. No doubt, it is one of the important
factor
Suggestion
factors
of life, but it is
also
necessary to work in a good environment
this
is most important. One point of view, an individual before joining an organization give importance to the
salary
and according to him the
salary
offered is not up to the mark because of which he drop that opportunity, but if he will not receive that kind of offer from other companies,
then
he doesn’t have the option to join that organization. Another
view point
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
, one person
want
Suggestion
wants
to join a well-known respectable company whatever
salary
they proposed.
This
will be the better choice, because that individual gain experience. May be for him the priority is to learn different things and get experience that will be fruitful for him in future.
In Addition
,
mostly
Suggestion
most
human beings are critical thinkers.
Financial crisis
Suggestion
The financial crisis
are
Suggestion
is
a lot. No doubt, things are getting
expensive
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expensive, for
for example
, food, accommodation, transportation and clothes. But beside all, if one person only waiting for the highest earning and due to
this
he is not working it will be the worst condition it is not worth full. He can’t be able to meet his needs. In conclusion,
salary
is
important but
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important, but
other factors are
also
important environment, co-workers and continuation of work. Sometimes, people find satisfaction due to the
salary but
Accept comma addition
salary, but
working environment make them feel satisfied and motivation level increases.
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