The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This
bar chart represents the total number of trips that children aged 5 - 12 made to and from
school
in 1990 and in 2010. As can be seen from the chart, over time the predominant method of commuting to
school
has changed from walking to being driven in a
car
. In 1990, over 12
millions
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million
of trips made to and from
school
was done on foot, followed by bus, cycling, a combination of walking and bus, and
finally
travelling by
car
as the least popular method of commuting. There was only over 4
millions
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million
of
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on
trips by
car
in
this
period.
However
, in 2010,
by contrast
, around 11 millions of
car
trips were made to and from
school
, rendering
this
method of travelling the most popular, followed by walking, bus, a combination of walking and bus, and
then
cycling. Overall, it can be concluded that there will be more trips made by
car
in the future as the use of
car
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cars
a car
is increasing.

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