The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
bar chart represents the total number of trips
that children aged 5 - 12 made to and from school
in 1990 and in
2010. As can be seen from the chart, over time the predominant method of commuting to Change preposition
apply
school
has changed from walking to being driven in a car
.
In 1990, over 12 millions
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million
of
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apply
trips
made to and from school
was
done on foot, followed by Correct subject-verb agreement
were
bus
, cycling, a combination of walking and Add an article
the bus
bus
, and finally
travelling by car
as the least popular method of commuting. There was
only over 4 Change the verb form
were
millions
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million
of
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apply
trips
by car
in this
period. However
, in 2010, by contrast
, around 11 millions
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million
of
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apply
car
trips
were made to and from school
, rendering this
method of travelling the most popular, followed by walking, bus
, a combination of walking and bus
, and then
cycling.
Overall
, it can be concluded that there will be more trips
made by car
in the future as the use of Add an article
the car
a car
car
is increasing.Fix the agreement mistake
cars
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