In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

Most of the modern employers hire
mostly
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most
experienced workers rather than people who have academic knowledge about the certain field that
employer’s need
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the employer’s need
employer’s needs
. If
this
hiring method will continue soon there will be no need for formal certificates, qualification and so on.
Personally I
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Personally, I
partly agree with
this
statement because even if workers have
experience
they may not have general knowledge about their field. Hiring mostly experienced workers might
cause
some problems.
For example
, unemployment.
But how
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But, how
hiring experienced workers can
cause
unemployment? The answer is
this
method can prevent new generation workers
such
as school or college graduated students to find a
job
that suits them. Because that
job
might require
experience
and to gain
experience
they should find
job
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a job
.
This
paradox
cause
unemployment in some countries. So to not
cause
this
problem most
employer
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employers
hire candidates with good qualification too. But even good formal qualification doesn’t always mean that these people know their
job
and most of them learn about it while working rather than studying. So it’ll take some time to teach them while people who already had
experience
doesn’t need
learning
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to learn
and they could start working
straightaway
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straight away
. In conclusion, I should say that there should be places for beginners and experts.
Submitted by zufarovma on

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