some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. others believe that they should only be allowed to study the subjects that will be useful in future, such as those related to science and technology. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The
university
students should
study
the subjects of their own choice or they should be obliged to
study
career oriented technology and science major subjects, is a widely debated issue. I think at the
university
level, giving a
student
choice to follow
subjects
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the subjects
of
own
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ownership
interest has far more
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
. On the one hand, the
university
is the highest citadel
for
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of
education in any country and it is considered to produce a
next
adept generation which has
capacity
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the capacity
to lead the nation. Those who opine that the tertiary education should be students own choice based, they express that, forcing them to learn modern employment oriented
study
will make them become office worker, not the country's leader. But, letting them follow their dreams will build more confidence and increase the
likelyhood
the probability of a specified outcome
likelihood
of mastering the area they have
choosen
one who is the object of choice; who is given preference
chosen
.
On the other hand
, recently, the progress of any nation is highly dependant on the availability of the scientific and technological workforce, and the
university
has the
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
to provide a nation with
such
workforce. So, the higher education institution has to consider it well before offering any range of courses to the students, they must know the consequence of path their
study
feilds
a piece of land cleared of trees and usually enclosed
fields
Fields
will take a
student
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
, and its future implications.
For example
, a syllabus bound
student
studies more enthusiastically and prepares exams well as compared to free majors students, in recent studies it is shown that
number
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the number
a number
of students dropped out of
university
was highest among those who have
choosen
one who is the object of choice; who is given preference
chosen
their subjects freely. Overall, pros of giving freedom to a
unversity
the body of faculty and students at a university
university
student
to
chose
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choose
what he thinks best fit his dream overweigh the cons, so, if the list of courses offered by a
university
is well based
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are well based
on
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
futuristic application, offering students hold onto their liking is not bad.
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