The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.
Also
, it shows the
percent
of male and female participated in each type of sports.
First
of all,
its
it is
it's
clear that the soccer it is the favourite game
to
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for
with
the
boyes
a youthful male person
boys
. While, the netball is mostly
playd
(of games) engaged in
played
by girls.
However
, both
gender
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genders
enjoy
play
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playing
Basketball so the
number
are
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is
fairly equal. According to the graph, cricket is a famous game among the males over 10
percent
. Though, there is hardly to find any girls are
intrested
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
in
this
sport there
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sport, there
is only 1% of them.In
addtion
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
, it
is seems
Suggestion
seems
that
boyes
a youthful male person
boys
buyers
prefer Marital arts with around 10 %.
While
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
Well
, it is
remarkbale
unusual or striking
remarkable
that girls go
swiming
the act of swimming
swimming
more than boys over 20
percent
of girls swim when there is less than 15 of
boys
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the boys
.
also
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Also
the
number
of
female
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females
who plays netball are almost over 25percent
,
Accept space
,
boys seems to not have
in
indefinite article, "an" is use before a vowel sound, "a" otherwise
an
intresting
arousing or holding the attention
interesting
in
this
sport
. In conclusion
,
Accept space
,
the
number
of boys who plays
sport
in New Zealand in 2002 are more than the
number
of girls except in two sports. It is clear that girls prefer other type of
sport
rither
on the contrary
rather
than the common ones.

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