The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first bar chart illustrates the progression of the number of
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a computer
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computer
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computers
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owned between the
years
2002 and 2010
whereas
the
second
bar chart groups
the
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computer
ownership
by
education
level
on
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the
year
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years
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2002 and 2010. Based on the first chart, it can be deduced that the percentage of
population
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that owned a
computer
steadily increased between the
years
of
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2002 and 2010. In 2002, only about half the population owned a
computer
while
in 2010, three out of four people owned a
computer
. An analysis of the data by
level
of
education
shows that higher levels of
education
is
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directly proportional to higher levels of
computer
ownership
in both of those
years
. The highest number of
computer
ownership
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can be observed at
postgraduate
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the postgraduate
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level
, which is a staggering 95 % in 2010, an increase of 15% from the
year
2002.
Additionally
,
computer
ownership
also
significantly increased in college and bachelor’s degree
education
level
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levels
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with an increase of approximately 20% in the
year
2010 when compared to
year
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2002. Not only that, even
on
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high
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a high
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school
graduate
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graduates
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and no high school diploma
level
, the
computer
ownership
percentage grew 30% between the two
years
. In summary, there has been rapid growth in
computer
ownership
in general and across different educational levels in the
last
decade.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, years, ownership, education, level, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consistent increase
  • growing reliance on technology
  • clear correlation
  • digital divide
  • notable growth
  • most pronounced disparity
  • gap reduced considerably
  • percentage growth
  • higher educational levels
  • educational groups
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