During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

Dear Jonathan, I hope
this
letter
find
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finds
you in
pink
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the pink
of your health. My name is
Liya
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Lea
and we met
last
month in a journey to Delhi. In our
in journey we
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journey we
discussed about today’s employment opportunity and you should me about your business experiences. I remember that we met
on
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at
in
cochin
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Cochin
International Airport and you were troubled with baggage that was
overweighed
usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it
overweight
. I felt very pleasure about shared your legacy to me because I have only one
bags
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bag
with 10 kg. It's
also
a funny moment, we bought a low Costed bag and transferred your items
to
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in
that bag. At the time of travel, you offered me a job in
UK but
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the UK, but
the UK but
I thankfully dressed the offer. But now I need a job. In our Conversation, I say that I have completed MBA in
hotel
management and worked as a team leader chef in the central plaza
hotel
I would like to work as a Chef
in
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at
your
hotel
in
UK
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the UK
because I can learn a lot of things from experienced chefs in your
hotel
.
Moreover
, I am a great fan of European Cuisines and tried to learn some of them. If you provide me the opportunity to work with your team
,
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,
I feel more thankful to you. I attached my resume with
this
letter and please consider me when you invite professional to your business. I am looking forward for your replay as soon as possible
.
Accept space
.
Yours faithfully, Mary Liya
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