During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Jonathan,
I hope
this
letter find
you in pink of your health. My name is
Liya and Change the verb form
finds
we
met Correct pronoun usage
I
last
month in
a journey to Delhi. In Change preposition
on
our
in Add a comma
,our
Add an article
the journey
journey
we discussed Add a comma
,journey
about
today’s employment opportunity and you should Remove the preposition
apply
me
about your business experiences.
I remember that we met Correct your spelling
be
on
cochin International Airport and you were troubled with baggage that was overweighed. I felt very Change preposition
at
pleasure
about shared your legacy Replace the word
pleased
to
me because I have only one Change preposition
with
bags
with 10 kg. It's Fix the agreement mistake
bag
also
a funny moment, we bought a low Costed bag and transferred your items to that bag.
At the time of travel, you offered me a job in UK
but I thankfully dressed the offer. But now I need a job. In our Correct article usage
the UK
Conversation
, I say that I have completed MBA in Correct your spelling
conversation
hotel
management and worked as a team leader chef in the central plaza hotel
I would like to work as a Chef in your hotel
in UK
because I can learn a lot of things from experienced chefs in your Correct article usage
the UK
hotel
. Moreover
, I am a great fan of European Cuisines and tried to learn some of them. If you provide me the
opportunity to work with your team , I feel more thankful to you. I attached my resume with Add the preposition
with the
this
letter and please consider me when you invite professional
to your business.
I am looking forward Fix the agreement mistake
professionals
for
your Change the preposition
to
replay
as soon as possible .
Yours faithfully,
Mary LiyaCorrect your spelling
reply
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.