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Recently you have travelled by plane and during the journey you had an issue with one of airline employee. Write a letter to the company manager and say Give details of your flight Discuss the issue you have encountered What do you expect the nature to do

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Dear sir I am writing
this
 letter to express my dissatisfaction during the journey with your Airlines. I boarded your flight number B12W from Mumbai to Delhi on
5th
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 of
this
 month. During the transit
i
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I
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 have faced an issue with one of your
employee
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employees
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 at
luggage
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the luggage
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drop in
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drop-in
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 point, the
incharge
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in charge
employee
 is Sam pictures is having
employee
 identification number H1126.
Although
, your advertisement and tickets highlighted that
maximum
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 weight limit for luggage is 15 kilos per person , to my surprise the
employee
 at the
counter argue
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 that limit is 10 kilos only.
As a result
 ,I have been charged extra for the remaining luggage .
Moreover
 , I have not been given any charge receipt for
extra
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 payment I was asked
made
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. I would like you to look into the matter and take
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apply
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a stringent
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astringent
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 action on
this
 person
,
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 if found guilty of being corrupt .In case if the charges are wrongly imprinted
then
 I would expect you to compensate me for the inconvenience faced, with a refund of ticket charges and extra baggage charges I paid . I am waiting for
positive
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a positive
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 response from your side.
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Yours
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Your
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Yours
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 sincerely
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