Some companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform?

With the changing business
environment many
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environment, many
companies and large organizations are promoting
uniform
for their employees. These uniforms at times are well accepted by the
employees but
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employees, but
certain companies are not accepting because of many reasons. There are many advantages of wearing
uniform
in the
company
.
This
makes the entire employee look alike with regards to the
dress
they wear. There won’t be any
dissimilarity
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dissimilar
among the employees with regards to the
dress
code.
Also
by wearing
uniform it
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uniform, it
makes the life of every individual easy by not thinking much
on
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about
what to wear.
This
also
cuts the cost of purchase of
dress
of an individual. Uniforms give a separate identity of an employee by representing the
company
. It shows the extra concern of the
company
towards their employees. As uniforms are the extra cost which any organizations incur towards their employees.
However there
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However, there
are certain dis-advantages of
uniform
. It eliminates the option of wearing the
dress
which any individual likes to wear. It becomes monotonous by wearing the same
dress
every day. Overheads of every
company
increases
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increase
with the provision of uniforms every year. Wearing uniforms every day becomes difficult to keep the
dress
clean and ironed, one cannot skip it. Because of wearing
uniforms no
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uniforms with no
employees can plan for personal party after office hours, as they need to change it.
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