You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

Dear Sir or Madam,

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is in

regards

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to the faulty

credit

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card

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statement

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that I received

your

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bank today. My name is Sunaina Khanna and I have been using

hdfc

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credit

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card

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services

from

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past

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1 year.My

credit

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card

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is "sunaina.khanna" and

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credit

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card

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number is CNFPK000007878.

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my contact details are mentioned in the portal,

but

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I would still like to mention my telephone number

incase

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needed.It is 7878990033. The

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that I received is completely faulty and it has put me

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under

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a lot of stress.The

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mentions that I have purchased a diamond ring worth Rs. 1 lakh and a

rolex

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Rolex

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watch worth Rs. 2

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, and the bill mentioned on

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statement

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is 3,15,000 INR. I can confirm

you

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that I have only spent 15000 rs.

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month through the

credit

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card

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and I am completely shocked by the rest of the purchases mentioned in the

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. I would like you to look into the matter and check if it is a fraud or a mistake from the bank's end.I want the bank to send me the correct

credit

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card

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statement

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for

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month and

releave

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release

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me from

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irrelevant stress. I am expecting an immediate response and a very quick resolution to

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issue. Thanks and Regards, Sunaina Khanna

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Apr 29, 2019

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coherence cohesion

The statement could include a clear link between each paragraph and the following paragraph.

task achievement

The context could be introduced in a more indirect tone, being polite and showing some restrain in the language used.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5

7.5

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

214 words

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