Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, climate change climbs the political agenda of different western countries. Some people believe that developed countries should act to combat global warming, others consider that since climate change affects the whole
planet
;
thus
there is the need to have a global action. In one hand, developed countries used fossil fuels and other components since the
first
industrial revolution, and thanks to them reached the economic level and social security that enjoys now.
For example
, without carbons, there would not be the train rail that enhanced the transportation of goods and people, which
favor
promote over another
favour
international trade.
Nevertheless
, there were not scientific proofs regarding the consequences of these actions. Developed countries are currently trying to reduce CO2 emissions and to tackle global warming.
However
, the effort, for now, seems
vain since
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vain, since
developing countries are
polling
the act of pulling; applying force to move something toward or with you
pulling
the air a lot.
Thus
, joint action should be taken.
On the other hand
, some people believed that developing countries should not be accountable for climate change which was initiated by western countries. Indeed, they need to use fossil fuel and other chemical agents which are dangerous for the
planet
, to develop them self and reach the same level of prosperity of the western civilizations. The BRICS sustains
this
argument, in fact,
for instance
, the spokesperson of China stated that western nations should have a significant impact in taking care of global warming and reversed it. In my opinion, we have a
planet
, and it is our responsibility to take care of it. While developed countries used fossil fuels for reaching
this
level of development, developing countries cannot do the same, because nowadays the consequences for the
planet
are known.
Nevertheless
, it is essential to support them in finding different ways to develop.
Thus they
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Thus, they
will agree in globally tackling
this
issue.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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