Some countries spend a lot of money to make bicycle usage easier. why is this? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion?

Before the invention of motor vehicles, there was only
one
mode to
commute which
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commute, which
we call it as
bicycle
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a bicycle
the bicycle
. It was invented back in
19th century
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the 19th century
by a
german
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German
civilian named Baron Carl. It took not long enough to invent motor vehicles or say cars. Since
then
people are more
facinated
having your attention fixated as though by a spell
fascinated
about motor vehicle not just because it is faster but
also
because it is more comfortable and needs less struggle to operate. As the time passed, the advancement took place
one
after the other and
bicycle
was taken over by cars. People now-a-days try to use it more and more to almost everything
for example
going to
trips
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trip
or to get groceries. There is no limit
for
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to
it. Today, we are so comfortable about it that everyone owns, which is now increasing the traffic and
pollution
.
Government organization
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A government organization
of some countries
are spending
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is spending
money extravagantly on promoting the usage of
bicycle
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the bicycle
bicycles
a bicycle
over motorized
one
because they are facing multiple
challanges
take exception to
challenges
like
pollution
, traffic, fuel import and etc. Countries
such
as Germany, Finland and china are among top 10 countries who has taken
these initiative
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this initiative
these initiatives
and have shown remarkable results. It is the best solution
for
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to
traffic congestion and
pollution
. Traffic congestion in these countries
are
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is
tremendously low because of
such
steps.
This
mode has
also
proven that not just they are
economic
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economically
but
also
healthy for
environment
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the environment
and human beings. It
produce
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produces
is produced
zero
pollution
and keeps
one
healthy as it boost the metabolism decreases stress level and many more to
go but
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go, but
the major question is that, is it really that crucial to use it now? In my opinion,
yes it
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yes, it
is important to start using
bicycle
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bicycles
as much as possible because we as human are utilizing natural resources so recklessly that the day is not far enough when we will be out of those resources and due to
pollution
the nature will
also
stop regenerating and which will
left
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leave
nothing but a
waste land
an uninhabited wilderness that is worthless for cultivation
wasteland
for our
next
generation.
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