Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs should be applied to all drugs, including tobacco and alcohol. What is your opinion?

Today's law has many wings and sub-wings with full of rules, regulations, clauses vis-a-vis sub-clauses, out which one of them is restrictions about hard drugs like heroin and cocaine. Consumption of
such
drugs is too hazardous to human life so as
such
were banned for sale or use.
In addition
to these, other types like tobacco,
alchohol
a liquor or brew containing alcohol as the active agent
alcohol
also
are to be completely refrained from export or import, sale or utilize them. Government has
to ideally
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to, ideally
, take strict steps to abolish the usage and purchase of
such
poisonous items, which kills the span of a person very badly and
repidly
with rapid movements
rapidly
. Depletion of smoke and drink leads to fatal diseases like Cancer, Liver Problems, Heart Attacks, Brain Strokes and so on,
besides
, will not leave the person till he dies. Even when he is alive, it won't allow the individual lead happy days, rather would keep them suffering, keeping them at
stake
Suggestion
the stake
. Medical facilities are abundantly provided for
such
cure but
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cure, but
it is aptly said and believed that "Prevention Is Better Than Cure", which has to be adhered thereto. There is no assurance of
receovery
return to an original state
recovery
even after multiple
Chemo therapies
Suggestion
Chemotherapies
, steroids,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
, are given, that,
such
life shall survive long. It makes the blood cells get infected in microscopic cells, with
a
Suggestion
an
infinity multiplying growth rate to the entire body or organ, once after
such
attack. There are many mind tuning programs available for coming out of these deadly habits, but again fashion in the modern trend tempts for wrong side only. Making the rules is not the only
way but
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way, but
firm standardization and stern decisions are the key paths to enhance the
such
in a positive angle. Concisely, I feel very strongly that stabilizing along with
actionables
something done (usually as opposed to something said)
actions
, awareness programs, is very much required for
aboilishing
do away with
abolishing
such
destructive activities, that show impact on oneself, family and society, declining the human values,
beofre
earlier in time; previously
before
it deteriorates the World.
Submitted by Mrs. Sumira Vempati on

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