Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs should be applied to all drugs, including tobacco and alcohol. What is your opinion?

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Today's law has many wings and sub-wings with full of rules, regulations, clauses vis-a-vis sub-clauses, out which one of them is restrictions about hard drugs like heroin and cocaine. Consumption of

such

drugs is too hazardous to human life so as

such

were banned for sale or use.

In addition

to these, other types like tobacco,

alchohol

a liquor or brew containing alcohol as the active agent

alcohol

also

are to be completely refrained from export or import, sale or utilize them. Government has

to ideally

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to, ideally

, take strict steps to abolish the usage and purchase of

such

poisonous items, which kills the span of a person very badly and

repidly

with rapid movements

rapidly

. Depletion of smoke and drink leads to fatal diseases like Cancer, Liver Problems, Heart Attacks, Brain Strokes and so on,

besides

, will not leave the person till he dies. Even when he is alive, it won't allow the individual lead happy days, rather would keep them suffering, keeping them at

stake

Suggestion

the stake

. Medical facilities are abundantly provided for

such

cure but

Accept comma addition

cure, but

it is aptly said and believed that "Prevention Is Better Than Cure", which has to be adhered thereto. There is no assurance of

receovery

return to an original state

recovery

even after multiple

Chemo therapies

Suggestion

Chemotherapies

, steroids,

etc

continuing in the same way

etc.

, are given, that,

such

life shall survive long. It makes the blood cells get infected in microscopic cells, with

Suggestion

infinity multiplying growth rate to the entire body or organ, once after

such

attack. There are many mind tuning programs available for coming out of these deadly habits, but again fashion in the modern trend tempts for wrong side only. Making the rules is not the only

way but

Accept comma addition

way, but

firm standardization and stern decisions are the key paths to enhance the

such

in a positive angle. Concisely, I feel very strongly that stabilizing along with

actionables

something done (usually as opposed to something said)

actions

, awareness programs, is very much required for

aboilishing

do away with

abolishing

such

destructive activities, that show impact on oneself, family and society, declining the human values,

beofre

earlier in time; previously

before

it deteriorates the World.

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