In many places new homes are required, but the only space available for building them is on the countryside. Some people believe it is most important to protect the countryside and not build new houses there. What us your opinion about this?

Earth is occupied 3/4th by water and the rest by land, where the term Land includes the forests, buildings, vehicles, everything. But
increasing ratio
Suggestion
the increasing ratio
an increasing ratio
of
population
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the population
is demanding a place to live either for shelter or for offices, which has highly
sweeped
possessing sweep
swept
the trees for
such
living, creating
lot
Suggestion
lots
of problems to the mankind.
This
expansion has passed till the countryside areas, as there is no other place available for construction of houses, due to the unavoidable inclination of
people
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the people
. Decrease in the forests, result in the declination of human and natural resources that are required for mankind to lead life.
For example
, when trees are cut,
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
impacts in
reduction
Suggestion
the reduction
of oxygen supply
that is
compulsory for a being, ultimately, water supply are drastically
falls
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falling
, as there will be hardly any rains. Obviously, paves way to the rapid attack of diseases, devastating the human life.
Moreover
, animals, birds and other species that live in the country side lose their shelter, food, etc., due to which species may die simultaneously. On the flip side, countryside lands expose the scenic essence of that Nation, bringing beauty to the country with their
colorful
having striking color
colourful
naturality
nonparticipation in a dispute or war
neutrality
.
Infact
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In fact
, they can be considered as landmarks, can be converted into exhibitions or places
of
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to
visit for pleasure trips, and so on. Well, children can be driven to educate them regarding the growth, necessity, advantages and disadvantages, practically. Many-a-times, family trips
in
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on
the
week ends
a time period usually extending from Friday night through Sunday; more loosely defined as any period of successive days including one and only one Sunday
weekends
can
also
be planned, in order to get relieved from the official and emotional pressures, consuming memorable time with relations and friends.
Community
Suggestion
The community
has to recognize the benefits, that shall walk
to
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in
them,
engrowing
growing abnormally into the flesh
ingrowing
engraving
greenery should be considered as a gift to all, that can be act as an engraving
cherishable
memory in a remarkable way. I opine, it is better not to touch the
outlands
Suggestion
Outlands
, rather look for alternatives within the city limits for a
better
Suggestion
good
, safe, happy, joyous and healthy living.
Submitted by Mrs. Sumira Vempati on

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