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Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does advantage outweigh the disadvantages?

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In
this
 day and age, traffic and accommodation problems are developing at a fast pace. For many of us, it is hard to stop these problems. Some argue that some companies should be moved to the countryside. I believe that
this
 suggestion has more benefits than drawbacks. The disadvantage of
this
 movement is the drop of client. It is true that most businesses are built near the
consumed
a person who uses goods or services
consumer
 markets to approach easily more customers.
Therefore
, if these companies move to the new location where is far from potential customers, they may
lost
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lose
amount
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an amount
the amount
 of profits and pay extra transport fee for their goods. Despite
this
, there are significant merits it can bring to citizens and other places.
Firstly
,
this
 idea
create
Suggestion
creates
 the equal development among the areas.
That is
 to say, moving some companies to rural places can help improving infrastructure through the taxes for local regions.
Furthermore
,
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
 market can be expanded thanks to
this
movement
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movement, thus
thus
 income of local people might be risen.
In addition
 to
this
, on a wider
level it
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level, it
 may
also
 benefit social problems. Means that when lots of businesses may not focus on the same city,
labors
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labours
 may not concentrate upon big cities. As the result is that some problems
such
 as pollution, traffic congestion,
criminal
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crime
 rate might be
fallen
mat together and make felt-like
felt
. I would
therefore
 argue that
although
 there are some disadvantages of the business movement trend from cities to
countryside
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the countryside
, they are outweighed by the advantages. It can enrich economic areas and local people’s lives.
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