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TOPIC 12: Some businesses find that new employees finishing education lack basic interpersonal ability such as working with others as a part of a team. What do you think are the causes of this problem? How to solve this problem?

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It is true that a new employee after graduating do not have
sufficient interpersonal ability
Suggestion
the sufficient interpersonal ability
,
for example
, doing
teamwork
Suggestion
team work
.
This
 leads a team to have a poor performance in front of their boss. In
this
 essay, I am going to examine the causes and how to solve
this
 problem.
Initially
, it is almost certain that most pupils, sitting in front of their lectures, always wonder what they are saying, or is
this
 subject relevant to their career in
future
Suggestion
the future
?
This
 is because both a school and a university has been focusing on theory than a practical, an internship is unable to catch up with the experienced workers in teamwork.
Moreover
, students teach what they should do to get high scores in the final term examinations;
as a result
, they lack confidence, will, knowledge, and skill in solving a group project, as well as,
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 interpersonal abilities that a company looks for. What should we do to solve
this
 problem? The
first
 approach is that an experienced employee should help the students structure the work that they have to do,
for example
, define the task, determine the steps necessary to achieve the goal, and so on.
Secondly
, before the group begins, the old one can have in mind that he/she gives
graduation
Suggestion
graduate
graduating
 students an opportunity to role-play how they might respond to problems within the groups. It is able to give a hand new employee realizes the situation and familiarizes herself or himself with that, which makes a teamwork environment be more in accord. In conclusion, new employees can lack basic interpersonal ability
such
 as working with others as a part of a team because of the reasons I mentioned above.
However
, an experienced worker can provide direction and build conflict-
solution
Suggestion
solving
 skills for the new are the best solutions for
this
 problem.
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