It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

The development of children
take
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takes
place in the
school particularly
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school, particularly
, when they are in their early
age
. It is very difficult for them to recognize the difference between
right
and wrong in
this
age
,
therefore
, it is paramount for children to learn the moral values at an early
age
and punishment is necessary for wrong things because it is fruitful for them to learn the distinction between good or bad behaviour. To embark, I believe that early
age
is the
age
in which children learn a plethora of things and it belongs to the
age
of learning as well. Children meet with different people of different thinking so they absorb and adopt a numerous things
such
as personality, way of thinking and talking, style,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
,
therefore
, it is essential to learn the difference between
right
and wrong at an early
age
. The future of a person depends on the hard work which he did in his early
age
,
furthermore
,
it
it is
it's
based on the decisions as well,
for example
, if a person takes a decision
with
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by
taking everything in view,
in other words
, if he takes a
right
decision for his future so his future may be bright enough. I strongly agree that by giving punishment to the children is not a good way to teach them a moral values and punishments are not necessary to help them learn
this
distinction because it can hurt the feelings of a child and a child may be
frustated
disappointingly unsuccessful
frustrated
by these punishments. Some people believe that punishments
such
as beat children if they do a wrong thing and taking them to the playground for a day or two and other more effective
penalities
the act of punishing
penalties
is a helpful way to teach them but I consider it as a bullshit. I agree that punishments should be given to the
children but
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children, but
give those
type
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types
of punishments which are not
physical but
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physical, but
effect as mentally,
for instance
, parents do not
brought
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bring
any kind of toys and chocolates to their children and tell them why they do not deserve it,
moreover
, parents do not talk to them for a certain time if they do wrong things. To sum up, a lesson to have good manner should be taught as early as possible and the effective and
possitive
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
punishments must use to show them the
right
path.
Submitted by nmnarora9 on

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