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Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reasons for your answer.

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It is believed that many people aim moving to countries where are
spoken English
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spoken, English
speaking English
speaking speaking English
 as the native
language
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language, such
such
 as Australia, Canada, the United Kingdom and the United States of America. Most people would like to study for an under or post graduate degree in one of these places. Bearing in mind the fact,
importance
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the importance
 of English
is appearing
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appears
obviously
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obvious
.
First
 of all, technological developments
such
 as
internet
Suggestion
the internet
, computer, social networks have widened people’s objectives. Recently, people have started to communicate each other easier compared to the past.
Thus
, work fields and occupations have changed enormously. There are many international companies, which have employees from various nations.
Therefore
, being able to speak in a common
language
 is more important than before.
Consequently
, English
has become to the
Suggestion
has become the
 most important international
language
 in my opinion.
That is
 why many people would like to study in English. People want to be a part of
this
 new-fashioned business
life
 and the
first
 prerequisite of it, is having good communication skills in English. Not only business
life
, but
also
 social
life
 has changed very much in recent years. Internet, social networks, video calling technologies
have brought
Suggestion
has brought
 new relationships in people’s social
life
. If you are able to speak a common
language
, you can socialize with people from many countries easily. It is clear that generally
this
 common
language
 is English. In conclusion, there are numerous reasons, which push people to study
abroad especially
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abroad, especially
 in an English-speaking country, and it is very understandable
requirement
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required
requiring
 of
this
 modern society structure.
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  • Globalized education
  • Access to education
  • High-quality institutions
  • Career opportunities
  • Proficiency
  • Prerequisite
  • Cultural immersion
  • Language skills
  • Global network
  • Technological advancements
  • Scientific research
  • Academic resources
  • Comprehensive
  • Personal development
  • Independence
  • Immersion
  • Employment prospects
  • Academic exposure
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