The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue. Some people argue that it is necessary for economic growth, while others claim that it damages local industries.

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It is considered by some that,
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shippment
goods carried by a large vehicle
shipment
shipments
of products a across national borders
is long been
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has long been
a controversial
problem
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.
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(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
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, there are others who think that have a badly affect the local production.
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Believe
that every country are
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have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
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free movement of goods.
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lost
for countries who
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free charge
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shippment
goods carried by a large vehicle
shipment
as an advantages.
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exchange of culture and
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not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
daily life essentials. One reason is that had made people life easier.
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the principal activity in your life that you do to earn money
job
group
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a person who operates a farm
farmers
who sale
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of them or themselves
their
production to other
countris
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
.
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importent
of great significance or value
important
is the fact that free movement of goods can help
in
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to
reduce the
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of the
materals
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
materials
material
. Which, could
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give help or assistance; be of service
help
poor countries
to recive
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receive
to receive
to resolve
their need of food or other things.
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, having a
freecharge
load anew
recharge
free charge
movemet
a change of position that does not entail a change of location
movement
of goods.
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to some, it can be a
disadvantages
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disadvantage
for the local industries.
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people start to
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have confidence or faith in
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on foregin products
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will have a direct
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
on the economy
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. Many think that the fruit and vegetables from other countries are better than the local one which lead to
dicrease
decrease in size, extent, or range
decrease
decreases
decreased
in the local production which mean a
problem
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on the economy.
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moreover
in addition
Moreover
, many countries produce a high
fee
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products
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products, therefore
therefore
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, poor countries cannot afford. In
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case, those
countrise
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
counties
controls
should be able to benefit from
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shippment
goods carried by a large vehicle
shipment
who cross
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
national borders by
receive
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receiving
a portion of money as a
fee
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to cross the borders. In conclusion, In my point of view, it can be benefit for poor countries to put a
fee
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for
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shippment
goods carried by a large vehicle
shipment
while
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that might effect in the export around the world.We need to have a clear
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the actions and activities assigned to or required or expected of a person or group
role
to
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stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something
avoid
any
problem
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if the
countris
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
decide
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decides
to charge who cross
thier
of them or themselves
their
national borders
otherwise
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will become a new
problem
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