Some countries spend a lot of money to make bicycle usage easier. Why is this ? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion?

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A huge sum of money is spent by some countries for making bicycle easy to
use
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. In my opinion, using
bicycle
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a bicycle
is not only environmental
friendly but
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friendly, but
also
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helps to control
traffic
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on roads.
Although
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it does not solve the
congestion
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problem
completely but
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completely, but
would reduce it to some extent.
Firstly
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, bicycles are the cheapest and most effective way to reduce environmental
pollution which
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pollution, which
in turn lowers the number of vehicles on the roads. As they
dont
do not
don't
use
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fuels they
dont
do not
don't
emit harmful gases
such
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as carbon
mononxide
an oxide containing just one atom of oxygen in the molecule
monoxide
into the
atomosphere
a particular environment or surrounding influence
atmosphere
and
also
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save earth's natural reservoirs of fuel.
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, protecting the
environmentand
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environment and
its resources. Another point to consider is that, when bicycles are made easily available more number of people will opt to
use
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them
instead
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of other vehicles because they will be cheap and
convinent
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
to
use
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.
This
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would be contributing
factor
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factors
for
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to
in
the
traffic
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reduction less amount of roads will be occupied with heavy motor vehicles.
Although
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availing bicycles to the public is a good option to reduce
traffic
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, I think few more steps should be taken in order to get the best solution to solve
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congestion problem
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congestion problems
the congestion problem
. One of them could be to spread awareness among people about the benefits of using a cycle.
For example
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, riding bicycle is prescribed as one of the best
excersises
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercises
exercise
to stay fit according to
HyderabadTimes
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Hyderabad Times
. Half an hour ride on daily basis improves body metabolism to a greater extent. Another point to consider is that improper roads are
also
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one of the major causes for
congestion
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. When the roads have potholes or is uneven riders find it difficult to balance themselves.
This
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causes major accidents on
roads
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the roads
and there will be a halt to the vehicles leading to
congestion
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.
Thus
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, alone bicycles cannot solve the problem of
traffic
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several measures are to be taken to obtain desired results. In Conclusion, I think that government should not only increase the
use
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of bicycles for
traffic
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reduction but
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reduction, but
also
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needs
to implement few
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to implement a few
additional measures
such
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as educating people, improving the quality of roads etc.
to
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To
minimize
congestion
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on roads.
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