Some people work for the same organisation all their work life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People had different opinions about working at the same
organization
or Use synonyms
different
. Suggestion
differently
People
thoughts are not always same, it totally depends on their working conditions. For some reasons it is better to work in Suggestion
Peoples
same
Suggestion
the same place
place
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,
while there are negative impacts from it Accept space
,
also
. Linking Words
This
essay will examine the various reasons and the consequences of working in the same organizations.
The main reason to change the working Linking Words
place
is Use synonyms
strong desire
to have a salary growth and Suggestion
a strong desire
also
to learn a new knowledge. A lot of people think that by changing the Linking Words
organization
they will receive Use synonyms
significant rise
in income, but it may not be true in all conditions. There are some people who Suggestion
a significant rise
receives
highest package working at Suggestion
receive
same
Suggestion
the same organization
organization
than othersUse synonyms
,
who keeps on changing frequently.There may be Accept space
,
chance
of getting promotions as they have complete knowledge about the Suggestion
a chance
the chance
chances
company
.Use synonyms
For example
, consider one Linking Words
person
who is working in some Use synonyms
company
for almost 10 years, they have huge experience and Use synonyms
able
to solve any problem quickly than the Suggestion
the ability
ability
person
, who Use synonyms
also
had about same 10 Linking Words
year
experience Suggestion
years
but
working used before two or more following things to stress that all are included
both
on
different places.There will be disproportionate burden of Suggestion
in
at
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company
to Suggestion
the company
companies
aquire
new employees and to train them.
come into the possession of something concrete or abstract
acquire
However
, working on same Linking Words
organization
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also
had some difficulties. Consider the Linking Words
person
who is working in Use synonyms
same
Suggestion
the same place
place
, their knowledge is limited only to that Use synonyms
company
. But the Use synonyms
person
who had worked Use synonyms
on
different places, has Suggestion
in
lot
of experiences Suggestion
lots
on
all the companies. They learn different things and capable of adjusting to all new places.They are habituated to learn new things very Suggestion
of
fastly
and sharing their experiences with rapid movements
quickly
to
others in Suggestion
with
Use synonyms
company
.
In conclusion, I think that people move from their work Suggestion
the company
place
to have Use synonyms
better working environment
. Suggestion
a better working environment
However
, the change may not always meet people's expectations.
So, it is important to consider all the possible outcomes and decide whether Linking Words
leaving
your working Suggestion
to leave
place
is worth it.
Use synonyms
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