Some coutries spend a lot of money to make bicycle usage earsier. Why is this ? Is this the best solution of traffic congestion ?

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Increased car
use
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and
traffic
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congestions are among the most
imprtant
of great significance or value
important
issues major metropolitans and
crouded
overfilled or compacted or concentrated
crowded
coutries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
face. In recent years several
coutries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
cultures
have been promoting the
use
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of
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bicycle
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the bicycle
a bicycle
bicycles
as a
way
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to ease these growing concerns. Promoting the
use
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of
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bicycle
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bicycles
the bicycle
a bicycle
is understandable as
this
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is a safe and
enviromentally
for the environment
environmentally
friendly
way
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of
transportation
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transporting
.
Initially
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, it is not a motorized
way
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of transportation and does not require the
use
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of fuel.
As a result
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bicycle
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use
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do not contribute to air pollution, a major concern in
crouded
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coutries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
. More so, using a
biycle
a wheeled vehicle that has two wheels and is moved by foot pedals
bicycle
decreased the amount of
cars
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cars, thus
thus
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further
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assisting in reducing
traffic
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problems.
Also
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important, using a
bicycle
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on a
regularly
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regular
have
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has
many medical benefits since it increases the duration we engage
with
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in
physical
activity
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activity, thus
thus
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decreasing cardiovascular diseases and, as a
cnsequence
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequence
consequences
, reducing hospital expenses. Many other solutions have been
propsed
make a proposal, declare a plan for something
proposed
to reduce
traffic
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congestion
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congestion, however,
however
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, in my opinion, the
use
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of
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bicycle
Suggestion
the bicycle
a bicycle
is the easiest and most cost effective
method
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methods
to fight off
traffic
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problems.
In contrast
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to other solutions, like increasing the
use
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of public transportation
such
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as busses and trains, Bicycles are cheap to buy and maintain and financing projects
such
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as
daily
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a daily bicycle
bicycle
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renting are not expensive and can be executed very fast.
Bicycle
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usage can be advocated
also
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by increasing taxes on gas and cars, something that can be done instantly without the need to plan a major industrial project. In conclusion, I believe that spending money to increase the
use
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of
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bicycle
Suggestion
bicycles
the bicycle
a bicycle
is a positive direction and should be continued.
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Bicycle
Suggestion
The bicycle
A bicycle
is an easy, cheap and healthy
way
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of transport and should be strongly advocated. I strongly
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
believed
that it is the best solution to decrease
traffic
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congestions and reduce air pollution in big cities. So lets bike to make our lives healthier.
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