Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is considered by some that developed countries are more responsible to combat
climate
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than developing countries.
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(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
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, there are others who believe that all countries are equally responsible for that.I will discuss both sides of the argument and I will summaries my personal opinion. On the one hand.Some think that developed countries have a
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major e
roles in
maintain
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maintaining
the
environment
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safe. They have the high
tecnhology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
to
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make certain of
ensure
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insure
that.
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in addition
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, these countries use more west due to the large number of factories which have a
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characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
effect on the
climate
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.
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, the area that
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plural of "this"
these
this
those
factories in
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having
the highest rate of the
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a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)
area
air
pollustion which
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pollution, which
pollution which
is a main
cuase
give rise to; cause to happen or occur, not always intentionally
cause
case
course
of the
climate
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.Theis is a reason why these countries need to take more responsibility to to combat
climate
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.
On the other hand
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. Others believe that both developed and developing countries have the
seme
closely similar or comparable in kind or quality or quantity or degree
same
amount of responsibilities towards the
environment
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.One side cannot solve the problem.If all countries worked together we can protect the
environment
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.The
climate
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is a global issue can only
solved
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solve
if the whole world helped.For
intance
an occurrence of something
instance
, All countries
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require as useful, just, or proper
need
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in the direction of
to
they
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start to use environmentally friendly materials as a start to
helpe
give help or assistance; be of service
help
to combat
climate
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. And
this
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can be done if the all countries took the same responsibilities towards protecting the
environment
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. In conclusion
,
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,
In my opinion
,
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I
bileve
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
that a problem as the
climate
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change it
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change, it
is important for every
countries
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country
.
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, all
countriers
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
counties
counters
have a significant
roles
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role
to find a
soluston
make a solicitation or entreaty for something; request urgently or persistently
soliciting
for
this
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problem wthere
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problem, whether
problem whether
problem where
it is a developed or developing countries.
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