Some people say history is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.

Although
, some people believe that history
subject
is most important
for
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to
in
student's school curriculum
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the student's school curriculum
, while others support the
subject
of science and technology because they find it more beneficial for one. In my opinion, both subjects have their own relevance. On the one hand, of discussion, proponents of history
subject
, define it as one of the most imperative and significant to plan for
future
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the future
.
In other words
, history serves the role of pioneer
to
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for
those who wants to discover something new because it develops the better understanding.
Moreover
, there is an opportunity
also
, past mistakes could be avoided by having the knowledge of that time and coming tomorrow can be secured by making oneself aware.
For instance
, a geologist whose research topic is based on earth must have
good understanding
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a good understanding
of ancient time
also
.
On the other hand
, regarding science and technology, its relevance cannot be explained in a sentence because the reason of existence of
world
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the world
worlds
and living being can only be explained by it only. Even, nowadays, we are completely surrounded by their outcomes
that is
why it is beneficial.
Furthermore
, the reason of everything in
this
universe
could only be demonstrate
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could only be demonstrated
by medium of science.
For example
, scientists have discovered
existence
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the existence
of other species in the galaxy, recently. In conclusion, despite the everyday discussion over
most relevant
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the most relevant subject
subject
for children, I believe both have their own charisma and significance. Both are necessary and indispensable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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