These days more and more people are going to other counties for significant period of time either to find a job or study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Moving to a new
country
has always been
fascinating experience
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a fascinating experience
.
Nowadays with
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Nowadays, with
increasing opportunities more and more people are moving abroad whether for employment or for higher studies. With having benefits of moving to a new
country
one
has to face a number of hurdles as well as it
is says
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says
is said
things come in packages. The
first
& foremost benefit of moving to a new
country
is
comparative benefit
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a comparative benefit
one
will receive particularly when you are arriving in a
third
world
country
from a developing
one
. These benefits will give you an
ease
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easy
,
in addition
will make you feel more secure about your future. Benefits
such
as Health is
fantabulous
in
western world
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the western world
, education is almost free till high school,
hence
such
facilities gives equal right to individuals, which every
country
cannot afford to do.
Hence
people can afford to have their basic rights very easily.
On
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In
By
contrast to avail these benefits
one
has to make
adaptable
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adaptations
to
new culture
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new cultures
and should learn to respect diversity rather than getting judgmental. There
is
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are
have been
always a lot of cultural and moral differences among nations, despite that
one
can easily adjust itself, if it starts accepting others cultures by making new friends
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
those who are aboriginals.
Furthermore
, homesickness is another hindrance which can
also
be resolved to
great extent
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a great extent
, if
one
stays in touch with loved ones with the help of
latest gadgets
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the latest gadgets
. In conclusion, there are numerous benefits of moving to a new
country
, if
one
is able to adapt to the changes and positivity accept them.
Further it’s
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Further, it’s
not always about adopting others, but
one
can
also
share their own
good
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best
values. As now the world being global village is full of diversified culture where people exchange a number of values among them.
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