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Many people are afraid to leave their houses because of the fear of crime. Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crimes. Others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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People have differing views when discussing about dealing with crimes.
These
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This
 caused fear to some
people which
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people, which
 opted to stay at home for self-protection. While others think that more
action
 from the
government
 is necessary, I firmly believe that they already proved their efforts and minimal
action
 is enough. On the one hand, some people feel that they do not feel safe as the crimes remain rampant nowadays. They are not convinced with the
action
 made by the
government
. They believe that the biggest
law
 offenders are still out in the street and they are the one who
need
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needs
 to watch out the most. They
further
 argue that enable to fight against
them the
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them, the
government
 and the
law
 enforcers should double their efforts to make sure of the people’s safety. Be that as it may, I firmly believe that the
government
 already have proven effective measure on keeping people’s security. The rise with the number of
law
 offenders caught and sent to prison will prove these claims. Based on the recent statistics conducted by Philippine Center for Investigative Journalism (PCIG), jails
have currently experiencing
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have currently been experiencing
were currently experiencing
have currently experienced
have currently been experienced
are currently experiencing
 3000 over-congestion due to large numbers of prisoner caught and proven guilty of their crimes.
This
 event is due to serious intake of our
government
 officials and
law
 enforcers to ensure people are safe inside and outside of their house. In general,
although
 there
are
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is
 some good reason with the people appealing for more
action
, I personally believe that the
government
 already proved their efforts to make people safe at all times.
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