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Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Climate change is an increasingly growing
issue
 nowadays. While some argue that it is the responsibility of developed countries to combat
this
, others are
on
Suggestion
in
of
with
 the opinion that all ought to have equal ownership on
this
.
This
 essay will discuss both the view and the reason why I believe that developed nations should take the lead.
One
 the
one
 hand, many are
on
Suggestion
of
in
with
 the opinion that climate change is a global
issue
 and everyone should fight together
on
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in
this
 arena; be it a rich country or a poor
one
. It is not the sole duty of developed nation to come up with solution since
this
 is affecting the whole world. How much ever small
one
 contributes, it will add up to the effort that others are making to tackle the detrimental situation that our earth is currently in.
On the other hand
,
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 believe that it is the responsibility of developed countries to take the lead since they don't have any other issues to handle unlike other small developing nations. Poor countries struggle to meet their basic
necesities
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessities
 and
hence
their
in or at that place
there
 is the limit to which they can contribute to a big global
issue
 like
this
.
Moreover
, since rich nations contribute
more to pollution
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more pollution
 and gas emissions from various means, it does
makes
Suggestion
make
sence
a general conscious awareness
sense
since
 to take a
more firm
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firmer
 stand on
this
 problem and thereby guiding and helping others to fight for
one
 common
issue
. Their technological advancements will definitely give them an edge over others. To conclude, all are equally responsible for the world as a whole and everyone should fight hard to save the earth. In my opinion, even though all countries have equal ownership
on
Suggestion
of
this
issue
, being stable and wealthy makes
developed
Suggestion
developing
 nations the front runners and they should be the leaders.
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