These days, people work in more than one job, and often change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays, performing multiple duties as well as altering profession frequently during
life
is becoming increasingly popular. For many people,
this
is the crucial decision to make their future bright and colourful by which they can complete their basic needs in
future
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the future
.
However
, there are both pros and cons to
deciding
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decide
to do
this
. In
this
essay,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will discuss some of the reasons why doing more than single
job
and changing career many times is so popular and some of the challenges to be overcome. Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of working in more than one
job
. One of the main positives of performing multiple duties it that it broadens your horizons. What
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
mean by
this
is that you have a chance to complete your all desires by making money.
This
can make you a wealthy in your
life
.
Secondly
, it can lead to a better quality of
life
. You have an opportunity to meet different kind of people from different business backgrounds. Take people from western countries as an example, nearly 91% of people do side business or work at other part-
time
jobs which gives them extra income. Turning to the other side of the argument,
time
factor is the major problem. Many
individual
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individuals
who change the work frequently or perform more than one
job
find it hard to cope with the
time
management, family care and many more.
This
often leads to incline family problems
such
as giving less
time
to family members,
communication gap
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the communication gap
between
life
partner as well as with children’s. Another issue is that it can be difficult to manage family functions.
In other words
, when you do more
job
, you are
time
poor and can not act as a family leader because you
can not
can not
cannot
concentrate on your family and your mind always roam around within your work zones. All things considered, doing many jobs and changing
occupation many
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occupation, many
time
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times
is never easy. You need to weigh up the pros of
better lifestyle
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a better lifestyle
, career goals and so on, and the cons of
time
management and family problem. Personally,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe the negatives in terms of family problems eventually outweigh any positives.
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