When people need to complain about a product or poor service, some prefer to complain in writing and others prefer to complain in person. Which way do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Alot
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A lot
of times people
need
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needs
to complain about a product or poor service which is quite common nowadays. It is,
therefore
, important for
one
to identify the best medium for your complaints to have the desire effect. Rising complaints both in
person
or in writing have their pros and cons, but
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would prefer to lodge my complaints in writing. From the
one
side, complaining in writing brings many benefits.
First
of all,
one
does not have to spend his precious time on driving, waiting for his turn and talking with a representative. He can just send mail or an email and get all explanations he needs.
Second
of all, I think it is the best way to avoid unpleasant
conversation
. Personally, I do not like to complain about
anything especially,
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anything, especially
in
person
. Sometimes it is
imposible
not capable of occurring or being accomplished or dealt with
impossible
implausible
to have a face-to-face
conversation
because a company which provides a product or service is too far away. From the other side, complaining in
person
has some benefits too.
First
,
this
type of complaining provides an immediate feedback. So, if
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have any objections about company products I will
recieve
get something; come into possession of
receive
all information and explanation right away.
However
, sending a letter to the company and
gettinga
Suggestion
getting a
feedback can take more than a month.
Second
, direct
conversation
is often more effective. People talk each other, see each other facial gesture and body movements, which can tell
alot
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a lot
about a
person
. In
adition
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
to these practical benefits, in the case if
one
can not
recieve
get something; come into possession of
receive
creditable explanation
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a creditable explanation
from
one
representative he always required to talk to another
person
.
For instance
, my cousin recently had some extra
withdraws
a retraction of a previously held position
withdrawals
from his account by his bank and he was not aware of it. So, he went to the bank and explained to the bank representative the
situvation
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
and they
togeather
in contact with each other or in proximity
together
found the solution and those
money
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monies
was given back to my cousin's account. I think face-to-face
conversation
is the best way to complain and get
feed back
the process in which part of the output of a system is returned to its input in order to regulate its further output
feedback
fast. In conclusion, I think if
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
had to
compling
express complaints, discontent, displeasure, or unhappiness
complain
complaining
about a product or poor service I will do direct
conversation
is
imposible
not capable of occurring or being accomplished or dealt with
impossible
I think I have nothing left but to send a letter or write an email there.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
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