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High job demands, stress and sense of commitment are among the main reasons people go to work when they are ill. This way they accomplish important tasks, but may infect others or get some serious health problems themselves. In your opinion should people go to work if they are sick? Support your point of view with relevant examples from your knowledge or experienc

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We live in a fast paced society  and people do not want to slow down even when they are sick. In the  quest to meet deadlines and accomplish important tasks
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employees often go to
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  when they are sick not caring about their health or that of others around them. I believe
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 act is wrong and employees should not be allowed to come to
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 when they are sick as
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sickness
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 can be highly contagious and the employee will not function efficiently.
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, a sick
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 should not come to
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 because their
sickness
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 might be highly contagious.
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, if  a
person
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 that has flu comes to the office, he/she can infect someone else as
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 is highly contagious. It is advisable for a sick
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 to stay at home, use his drugs and get better so as not to infect others with his diseases.
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, If the
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 comes to the office, his condition might worsen and in the quest of accomplishing his task he will create more harm to himself than
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 as his brain will be disturbed.
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, sick people shouldn’t come to
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 as the
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 might stay longer. Most times, people fall ill due to stress and lack of rest. So
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if a sick
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 who should be resting comes to
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, he might worsen his situation and his
sickness
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 might stay longer. It is advisable that a sick
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 should be well rested so he can recover quickly and once he is back on his feet, he will be able to function perfectly, all tasks will be accomplished and deadlines met. Some people might say that the sick
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 ought to come to
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 in order to perform all the
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tasks
 expected of him.
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, it should be noted that
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person
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  won’t function effectively as he isn’t in his right frame of mind and his brain is muddled.
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,
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 that he would ordinarily finish in 30 mins will take him maybe 1 hour to complete.
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Thus, in
 the long run, he finishes the
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work but
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work, but
 at a slow pace thereby making him inefficient. In conclusion, people shouldn’t go to
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 when they are sick and alternatives can help perform the required task. Companies should have sick leave as part of their benefits so staff can  take leave when they are indispensable. Companies should ensure that staff that
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the office
 when they are sick due to their sense of commitment should be asked to go back home as “Health is Wealth”.
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • high job demands
  • sense of commitment
  • accomplishing important tasks
  • infect others
  • serious health problems
  • spread of illness
  • reduced productivity
  • company culture
  • promote health
  • remote work
  • paid sick leave
  • quicker recovery
  • efficiently and effectively
  • modern technology
  • flexible work arrangements
  • moral and ethical responsibility
  • consideration for others
  • wellbeing of coworkers
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