Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Almost everyday television programs show scenes of

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images in computer games too. The audience is divided, someone says that the view of these scenes damage the behaviour of society, someone else admit that the

violence

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seen on TV does not have any negative effects on people. I think that an adult person is able to divide the reality from the fantasy, so, if he has an educational and cultural background there is no risk that he will imitate what he has seen. The younger, especially kids, are more inclined to copy some actions, for

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guess is important control what they watch. Nowadays media are full of violent scenes: video of fights recorded by mobile phones or film’s parts.

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brutality everywhere and there are some people that used to imitate what they see.

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I think that the solution is not

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every form of

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. If an adult man has received a good

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recognize what is wrong and dangerous for his life and for people’s life who are around him. According to me these continuous displaying of

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could have negative effects on children. They start to play

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video games

when are really little and learn

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these the existence of weapons. They learn to use mobile phones very early and now on

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is possible to find everything. They could watch tutorials about the use of guns or videos that show moments of bullying made by younger people. They will grow thinking that the

violence

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is the normality. The quick fix is not denying the use of

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check what they do and explain them what is right and what not. To

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think that could be appropriate reduce scenes of

violence

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, but with a right education the risk that these

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on behaviour is reduced.