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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them.Sometimes, government has to pay for their care. Who do you think should pay for their care friends or family?

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With the changing era, there have been many transformations in the
society
, which have had
huge impact
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a huge impact
 on everyone’s life. The rise in the demand
of
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for
 old age homes
arise
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arises
 the question on
behavioural aspect
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behavioural aspects
a behavioural aspect
the behavioural aspect
 of today’s generation towards their parents.
This
 essay
will illustrates
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will illustrate
 whether it’s a blessing or a curse for the
society
 and what need to be done for the improvement.
Firstly
, the problem is
increase
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increasing
 in nuclear family trend in the
society
. With
modernisation
making modern in appearance or behavior
modernization
, parents are so busy in their professional lives and giving better livelihood to their children
,
Accept space
,
 that they often forget to teach them values and ethics.
Secondly
, modern generation does not want any kind of interference in their lives. They get easily tempted by other’s
,
Accept space
,
for example
, children adopt celebrity as their role models and often want to copy them.
Thirdly
, rise in the inflation force children to drop their parents to old age homes as they find it difficult to afford their needs.
Moreover
, there should not be an issue if government
bear
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bears
 their expenses as we have some moral responsibility towards them. But some moral support should be accepted from their children too. They should frequently visit them and keep a check on them, so that they should not feel abandoned. To conclude, one should understand that
old
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older
 people are
blessing
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blessed
 in
this
society
. Without them, we are nothing but selfish souls
.
Accept space
.
 Government should take some strict steps against those who torture their parents and treat them badly.
To
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In
 my opinion, old age homes should be connected to orphanage so that
old
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older
 people can
find homely
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find a homely
 environment and vice versa.
Submitted by Chhavi on

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