Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Many people believe that the

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on TVs or video games has a negative

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effect

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on the society, while others believe that it do not affect on people's behaviour. In my essay I will discuss how these actions would harm our society.

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, kids in a particular age copy whatever actions they see, and in nowadays most video games,

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as PUBG, depends on

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,

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using equipments or hands fighting. If we allowed our kids to play these type of games it will affect on them when they grow up and become teenagers, everything they copied when they were kids they will do it as they get

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stronger

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, as some people

who are not educated and their thinking is limited and they follow traditions

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when they see

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on TV series or shows they will find it as a normal thing. They will start hitting anyone whenever he/she gets angry without thinking

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about

the results that may happen. Especially men in

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case whenever they get

angry they

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angry, they

do not feel nor think wisely which lead up to many divorce cases, mostly in Arab countries. Even though

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should be forbidden in all countries, some people think that it will not affect on our community and that goes back to the parents if they do not practice

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in front of their kids, as well as, teaching them that it would hurt others and end up with

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bad results

a bad result

as injuring your friends or breaking one of his/her body parts. Most kids that we hear about or see on the street practice

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with

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of them or themselves

their

friends

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of their careless parents.

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, I wish if the government put laws that punish people who practice

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violence, whether

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inside their homes or outside. Some countries punish the parents if they hit their kids, but in Arab countries hitting kids is something normal they believe

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way is better to build a good generation for the future.